I was hoping to have a bit more of a discussion at Baen’s Bar; if you have some critiques of Superego, please participate. I plan on starting on a regular novel soon – probably back to standard third person – and would like some feedback if you have some. As for the epilogue, I’ll at least send it to the participants in the discussion. I think the story works without it, but I think it will be a nice addition.
For the Superego unconcerned, expect the next part to Wednesday’s IMW later today.
I keep trying to make comments, critiques, suggestions, provisos, disclaimers, etc.etc. at Baen’s stupid Bar. Either I get timeout errors or the stupid links carry me back to the story. It’s a good story, but I’ve read it 5 times already. I was just curious, is this an evil plot? Years from now, once the evil nano-bots that you’ve implanted at Baen’s Bar have permeated the entire net, will we eventually reach either Superego or a timeout error no matter what we click? Oh… and First!
Did you try the keep me logged in option? Or writing what you want to say separately and then cutting and pasting?
Anyone else have a problem?
I’ve been trying to comment too, but my problem is probably that I’m too stupid and can’t figure out how to comment. What ever happened to Vito? He seemed like such a nice guy…
smitty,
It’s a bboard. There are reply (and quote) options over each post.
As for Vito, I wanted another scene with him, but it didn’t fit.
Please post the epilogue here too…what started here should end(?) here.
Yes, commenting on the whatsa-mahosey Bar thing was not very straight-forward (reply?…quote?…what about COMMENT!), and only for you would I register for anything online and risk junk mail.
Tried to get on.
Gave up.