I have completed the first chapter of Hellbender and am working on the second chapter. After SarahK looks over the first chapter and corrects the grammar so it doesn’t seem like a three-year-old wrote it, I’ll put it up in the Slush section of Baen’s Bar for those who want to help critique it. You’ll need to register for the forum to participate, but it only takes a minute and I’ve never gotten bothered by them on the e-mail address I provided.
Writing is a passion of mine but I have a lot to learn. Any help in critiquing will be especially appreciated, and you’ll earn extra IMAO Bonus Points which are redeemable for free IMAO posts.
You lie. points are not redeemable. it says so on the back.
Why not just E-mail it directly to the four or five of us who want to read it. Not only would that prevent public mocking, it would help you to prepare to fill the void J.K. Rowling will be leaving in the literary world. Also I would recommend that you refrain from publishing sexually explicit items in your books. That way you inevitable Senate run will not be marred.
If I wanted to avoid public mocking, I never would have started a blog.
We all know why you started this blog. It was to show off that you had married up and to throw it in the face of us 98 pounders.
throw in a free HellBender T-shirt and I’m in.
What would I do with a IMAO post? I would berate and taunt the Senate Republicans for being the biggest collection of Rino’s and backstabbers ever seen. How they are never united easily divided, and for the most part turning on basic Conservative principles. Following this I would mock all those who score lower than 38 on the how conservative are you quiz.(FrankJ & SarahK and their lovechild Moonbeam you Hippie’s) From their I’d find evil scary monkey and eat his eyes turn them into poo and then throw it at him. Basically what I do everyday except it would be posted.
Have you posted hellbender yet? I haven’t seen it but I might be looking in the wrong place. There’s about 5 or 6 Baen’s pages.
p.s. I got the Chronicwhatcles of Dubya yesterday. it’s awesome. thanx frank.