I’ve resubmitted my fantasy/western short for Baen’s Universe. I’ve edited it down so it’s now pretty much straight action (and also tried to improve the general literary quality of it). You can find it at Baen’s Bar in Baen’s Universe Slush as “No Good Deed… ver 2.” Constructive or destructive criticism goes in Baen’s Universe Slush Comments in topic “No Good Deed… ver 2 comments.” I like the characters and setting enough that I might use them for the next story bit by bit.
BTW, there’s a reference to the last line of my favorite movie near the beginning. Special bonus samurai points to whoever can point out the line and what move it comes from.
Also, La Shawn Barber has a new blog devoted to Fantasy Fiction for Christians (and I agree with her that Harry Potter falls under that category).