I’ve written another short story in my attempt at (somewhat) serious writing. It’s entitled “No Good Deed…” and is a lot more lighthearted than Superego (and a ton shorter than that was in toto). So, there’s a lot of humor in it, but I hope it also makes a good action tale (it’s a western… of sorts).
It’s at Baen’s Bar (of Bane.com) in the “Baen’s Universe Slush” section under “No Good Deed…” (putting it there makes it a submission for the new e-zine they’re making). Comments go in the “Baen’s Universe Slush Comments” section where a “No Good Deed…” topic has already been setup.
I’m most worried about the middle section bogging it down too much and would like lots of opinions. There best put in the comments section, because that shows people are reading the story and bring it to the attention of the editors.
There, maybe that will have gotten the writing bug out of me for a little bit.